2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to my hometown,my best friend.My hometown is the beautiful place which I have been ever. As for my hometown,I would like to take her see what the most interaesting place is Weishui big bar that is said to the biggest clay bar in Asia.First of all ,there is limpid water and freshed breath.When you stand in bar,you will feel pleasantly cool wind.Then,we also go to other feature spot,such as Yanjiangjun cave,Xinshen cave that is formed nuturally.