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若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
What's your understanding about happinese? does it always means things that is wonderful? In my opinoin, it means more than its literal meanings. When i was in my high school year, i was so tired of learning math, because i thought it was difficult to understand its preceptions and the amount of computation in mathematics was great.Gradually, i lost the interest about it, of course,my final exam results of math was fairly poor, it hurted me a lot. Fortunately,in order to obtain a promising future, i managed to change myself,though the process was so formidable for me, but i survived in the fierce battle, and i gain the true happinese eventually.
