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能够使用一些不错的从句；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
To live a better life become a pervalent and pervasive phnomenon around us .just as the saying "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." But people hold divergerious view on the issue. In the first instance, people who want to devotion themself into something glorious take the mission on their shoulder,to a large extent,their self value build up by greatful things.people's interpretations,however,are divergent on this point,they prefer seeking their really want and trying to make it come true.Dreamis to them what water is fish.people who like this make efforts to have a meanningful life. As far as i am concerned,Admittly,how to live a meanningful life give rise to some problems,but i insist that living your own style is worthy being highly applauded.
