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Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? With the development of technology,nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life,and million of young people have made friends online.however,I hold the view that it is not wise to make friends online.Not only is it wasting our time,but also it is hurting our health of body and mind. first of all,on the Internet,we don't know the people who we talk with.We even don't know the qulity,personality and character of the people,who is a strange person for us.We also don't know he or she is honesy or harmful to us.Thus,I think it wasting to make friends online.What's more,if we are absorbing in making friends online,we will want to chat with the person all the time and gradually depend on it.As time goes by,we may overlook the firends in our ture life and may lose the ability to communicate in the ture life.Due to the reason that on the Internet we don't communicate face to face.In addition,when the friend online doesn't chat with us one day,we will find something lost.Consequently, I consider thhat it is hamful for us to make friends online. In my opinion,it is not wise to make friends online.Because it's not meaningful.We should make friends in the real life,which can be a long and ture friendship.
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