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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3095[网页划词已开启]
要求:
题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

能够简单运用一些从句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? With the development of technology,nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life,and million of young people have made friends online.however,I hold the view that it is not wise to make friends online.Not only is it wasting our time,but also it is hurting our health of body and mind. first of all,on the Internet,we don't know the people who we talk with.We even don't know the qulity,personality and character of the people,who is a strange person for us.We also don't know he or she is honesy or harmful to us.Thus,I think it wasting to make friends online.What's more,if we are absorbing in making friends online,we will want to chat with the person all the time and gradually depend on it.As time goes by,we may overlook the firends in our ture life and may lose the ability to communicate in the ture life.Due to the reason that on the Internet we don't communicate face to face.In addition,when the friend online doesn't chat with us one day,we will find something lost.Consequently, I consider thhat it is hamful for us to make friends online. In my opinion,it is not wise to make friends online.Because it's not meaningful.We should make friends in the real life,which can be a long and ture friendship.

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