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能够使用一些不错的从句；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
When it comes to happiness,happiness should be ragarded as the ability to deal with problems,but not the absence of them. In fact,numerous facts can be enumerated in our daily life.The case in point is like this:a large number of students failed to pass the college entrance examination.For instance,YuMinghong who failed three times bulid up New Orient which plays a vital role in education. Apart from that,LiuXiang suffer from pains so that he dropped the Oliympic games. From what has been discussed above,we know that it is cruial to develope our ability to cope with problems.When meet with problems,we should ecourage ourselves to chanllege them sufficently with a happy mood by seriously thinking and comprehensive analysis.Only if so, can we succeed in settling them.
