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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance Nowadays, more and more women, even some men go to Korea to make cosmetic aesthetic surgery. I am wondering why it is so popular. Years ago, we think it's shame to do this, but now it becomes a trend. It's ordinary to see a actress or actor make a big change in her or his appearance. I think the most imprtant factor is people likes beanty more. But I think this is unwise. Apperance is just a outlook,you can change by surgery or make-up. The most important thing in surviving in the social is ability and personality. After the first look we deal our realtionship by ability not by appearance. Maybe you are beautiful, others like you very much, but with time going unless you are respectful, trustful, and noble, or people will tired of staying with you. So from where I stand, I think the appearance is just temporary, the inside quality is eternal. On one hand we can't judge people by appearance, on the other hand we have to improve ourself by study and practise.
