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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Keeping a Good Mood If you will notice, you would find that people were anxious more and more. If you will notice, you would find that voice of complain more and more. people had a explosion temper more and more. But, why? people in modern society live under a lot of pressure，from education，career，or family. so it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. If we all forgot make myself had a good mood，perhaps，we are didn't far from die.what's more, if we had a bad mood at home, in the company or in the school,we may make our family and friends, companies had a bad mood. The bad mood spread as virus. However, what should we do to keep a good mood? We are not time enough，in fact. All things considered, the time is important to keep a good mood. But, the little. We can wandering on the woodland, or watch a movie , about the nature, about the food. For some people ,who's want to something of exciting.Do you like. Besides ，if you never had a little time, you may be thinking about what‘s the real things you want. Keeping a good mood forever. wether or not，who are you ，how are you， where are you. The life of a single are not enough time, and real things what you want was the important.
