2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I will introuce the town to my foreign friend ,my hometown localted in southwetern in China,it famous by tea and drag,local people are frindly for vistor,and they like play sports likes other place. if my foreign friend come l will take them to a town which near Burma,they will enjoy different culture in the same place ,it is unbelieveable,what is more, they will can see good view when they draw the curtain,they often can see house of another country. i think my friends will like local dishes ,such as beef soup , tea rice, it is a ecia dishes for them.when they eat local foods,they can listenning some music about nations,and sometime local people will invite my foreign to join them. in short, i hope my foreign friend can enjoy every day ,if i were them ,i must come to here as a visitor.