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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3976
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题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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The importance of keeping a good mood Playing different roles in real life, we have to deal with all sorts of issues. For instance, as a student, it is our duty to study at school;an employee should work hard in his position; to make delicious dishes is a cook's obligation;ect. No matter what role we act up, it's enevtible for us to comfront difficulties that annoyed us, even influence on the working efficiency. Thus, keeping a good mood is quite important for us. There are some suggestions to keep a good mood. For example, when you face with a grind, you had better clam down and analyze the obsacles that block in the way to handle the grind, instead of complainning endless. Then, you may hit upon the idea on the task. Further more, it is advisable for you to take a deep breath and ask for help from your friends or colleagues, just believe that a tough work can achieve a better you. So, encourage yourself to challenge it. Eventually, a good mood will follow you. As a saying that the ideas on handling the problem is more than the bugs themselves. Therefore, we must keep good mood and positive attitude tawards difficulties.

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