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The importance of keeping a good mood Playing different roles in real life, we have to deal with all sorts of issues. For instance, as a student, it is our duty to study at school;an employee should work hard in his position; to make delicious dishes is a cook's obligation;ect. No matter what role we act up, it's enevtible for us to comfront difficulties that annoyed us, even influence on the working efficiency. Thus, keeping a good mood is quite important for us. There are some suggestions to keep a good mood. For example, when you face with a grind, you had better clam down and analyze the obsacles that block in the way to handle the grind, instead of complainning endless. Then, you may hit upon the idea on the task. Further more, it is advisable for you to take a deep breath and ask for help from your friends or colleagues, just believe that a tough work can achieve a better you. So, encourage yourself to challenge it. Eventually, a good mood will follow you. As a saying that the ideas on handling the problem is more than the bugs themselves. Therefore, we must keep good mood and positive attitude tawards difficulties.