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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者在句法层面做的很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,with the development of the internet,it is more convenient for us to communicate with each other.People can talk with friends on the internet wherever and whenever. There is no doubt that communications on the internet have lots of advantages,which make it become more and more popular.But on the other hand, too much electronic communication will have a bad effect on the face-to-face communication and even replace it.Besides,talking with others by sending email,on wechat and so on making people don't want to talk face to face.As the picture shows us that the daughter didn't want to visit the parents though she is in upstairs,which made them sad.In addition,It is a traditional way for us to communicate with others face-to-face,so we can easily understand others by their words and actions,making us more closed. In a word,we should try our best to talk with others when we have opportunities,though we can also talk on the internet.

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