2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

On Excessive Packaging Nowadays,a lot of goods has on excessive packaging.Different people have different opinion. Why could the phenomenon arise?So i think there are have some reason.Firstly,some company hope their goods can sale well,because good packaging can attract many people care their goods and buy it.Secondly,company want use the excessive packaging increase their goods price.Thirdly,the companys compeatition result. As far as i am concerned,the phenomenon is very bad.On one hand,the excessive packaging can wast lots of resous.On the other hand,the phenomenon result in goods quality bad to bad.So,i hope we should give up the phenomenon.