2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Many years ago,mobile phone is expensive.But with people's life better and better, the number of mobile phone users are increasing. Nowaday,mobile phone can not only make a call but also do many things like computer.It can help us in work or study and also can help us to spend our spare time. Tough mobile phone has many advantages,it causes a lot of trouble.Such as ,in the street,you can see many people walk with a mobile phone on their hand.May be one day people are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see.Even though you are not blind,but you can not notice anything expect your phone. Overusing mobile phone may descrease communite among people.And you may ingore some fun things in the nature.So limite to use it.