2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Now in the street you can see more cars than before.Cars make us convenice,but with it appers lots of traffic accidents happen,such as drunk driving. Drunk driving is common.Some people may ignore it.They think after drinking they can also concentrate on driving.And after some times drunk driving,they are still safe.Maybe they are lucky.But in fact everyday thousands of traffic accidents happen because of it and people die.The danger of it arouses us to do somthing. Now traffic police is serious on fighting against drunk driving.Every night many policemen are working in the street to test drivers.Once drunk drivers found,they will be punished very hard.Some mersures also be taken. Fighting against drunk driving is very important.Though it is less than before,we also should be hard on it.I hope in the future,no drunk driving accident happens.