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Life like a long jounery with many tough issues and problems,The time we faced with trouble,we ought to make chioce and decide what to do .But just as an old saying said,"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket".It is important for us to realize something as follow. In this day and age,when faced difficulties,people in a large extent come up with only one solution to the question,but if this one is not so correctly as they all imagine,people will fail,As for others,however,are divergent on this issue,people like this always think over and over,furthermore,come up with as many worthy ideas as they can.So that they can absolutely solve different conditions . As far as i am concered,just as a colleage student,thinking things over and over again give rise to improve our own ability,I insist that it is worthy highly applauded.
