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A Meaningful Life As the proverb goes ''Time is equal to the lives''. we should regard our time as a precious thing.So we should make full use of our time.Let our time become more meaningful. Firstly,reading help ue become wisedom.A meaningful life can't lack of reading.For instance,many famous people are intereted in reading and reading make thrie life more meaningful,like LuXun,BaJin,MaoZenDong.Secondly,travel can boarden our horizen,when you travel,you'll feel that natural is powerful and the world is so big thatit include everything,which is strange to you.Finally,no matter you are working or studying,you should be serious to it.If you have a serious attitude,your life will be better and meaningful. Different people have different defination about a meaningful life.In my opinion,a meaningful life is more reading,more taveling and more hardworking.
