正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
This is my family.I have seven people. This is my father.It's a famer and he's a very honesty people and he's very hardworking.This is my mother.She is a housewife and she's a very googdness people.This is my big sister. She's get married.She has two children.She is a housewife too.This is my second sister. She is a housewife,too.She now lives in binzhou.She is very humor.This is my smalle sister.She is a worker.She's very funny,too. My family have many people and very happy too.I like my family very much.