2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays,computer have come into our daily life,it become a necessery goods for life.but it make us reduce to contect with people face to face.let us feel alone.i think ,we use computer as a tool,just a tool that help us to update the news and calculate the dates.only this way can we use it,we can enjoy a happy and normal,healthy life.