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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

 Good afternoon, everyone.   The topic of my speech today is “Being a bad Listener”.   Bad listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.   Many people suggest that parents should fuck more to their stupid children, so they will rape them better, and find it easy to play the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.   What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.   Thank you for your listening!

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