小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend ,I think she is the most prettiest of our girl-friends. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth, her voice is better,she is good at in singing.we are all like singing her song. She is a bright girl,she likes reading novels,playing ping-pang.and she is very nice.she often helps us. so she is popular among my friends.