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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,it is universally acknowledged that the more certificates you get,the better future you will have.Under the guidance of the rule,more and more people become crazy about certificate.As they say,we are in a "certificate age".When you enter a top university,they need your certificate.When you face a job interview,your all types of certificates become a symbol of your competence to be equal to the job. It seems that certificate is very important.But is it really right that we appear to be its slave?Most people,dying for certificates,are preparing for their future.For example,they can get their ideal job with a relevant certificate in their hands.Of course,it cannot be denied that others just want to show off and they are eager to show their abilities in every field. In my opinion,why people have a passion for certificate is beyond me.It dose not mean that I deny the importance of it,but what I think is that we should get certificate that we actually need.And what matters most is supposed to be our real ability rather than a paper showing off our skills.
