小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,She is a friendly girl and vary kind.She's name is max,have long hair and break.She 17 yeas old,study better and English well.she's family is vary big and she have a rooms belong herself.She like to play computer games and reading book.She like eat egg and rice.