2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Computer and Man In recent years,because of technology development,computer become essential in our life.People always use a variety of soft wares on computer to help us finish work.And it is convenient to us. However, with the people using computer more and more rapidly,people having a dependency on computer. It seems that if someone who do his work without using a computer, it can be difficult to finish.People got some abilities in the past,but now with the computer use crazy,people lose capabilities which computer can instead.And if it get worse,people will do nothing any more. From my perspective,computer sure can make our life simply, but it also let us get more lazy than before.In other means,though the computer is convenient to us, we also should learn some essential skills so that we can choose to do something.The choice whether using the computer should be independence.In a word, we should use the computer independence and freedom.