小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a little dog.Her name is Do DO.She has 9 yeas old.But,She looks like very cute. She has two big and black eyes,And she is a black dog. I often take she to walk.And she is very like to walk whith me.Sometimes,I give she eat some fruits,because I think eat a few fruits is helpfull dog's to health .But She doesn't like apples.