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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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On Maintaining the Trust Nobody can live in society alone.People need to have a circle to communicate with others so that they can make friends and ask someone for help.Therefore,the trust of each other is vital to maintain. As time goes by,people usually feel more pressure about work or home than before,so that they want to talk with their friends or family to relieve their feelings.But who is the man to trust and be trusted.If we support to share our minds,we should maintain trust with someone who is your true friends.Not only share your mind,but also work in office.People should trust their teammates in order that they can finish their tasks well. Trust is the best word in the world because is the best quality in our life.For the trust,we can talk to our friends about privacy,also for it,we can cooperate to finish jobs with our fellow.We should maintain trust with each other,and never to destroy the trust any more.

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