小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a little dog.Her name is Do DO.She has 9 years.But,She looks like very cute. She has two big and black eyes,And she is a black dog. I often take her to go for a walk.And she loves to go for a walk whit me.Sometimes,I give her eat some fruits,I think the appropriate give the dog eat a little fruit is help -full to health.But She doesn't like apples.