2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Do you know The Great Wall ,it's the ones famous visit pleace of China ,the great wall was built in two thousand year age ,where is lay in the easthest China ，is a huge porject,comsuer the ancent people smart ,it has be seem the mark of China . The scend pleace I wiil show them to The Tian An Meng Squer,our famous leader Mao Ze Don have a peture in there