2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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Dear sir, I want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.I am a doctor,so I hope the child have a dram which is helping people in danger.If the child would,I will be do this plan.Firstly,I can offer money to pay all schooling.Secondly,the child can stay my home two day in every week.Lastly,I can took him to helping poor people.I holping hear a good news.