2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to China Hello,Deibe.When you told me that you will come to China.I was very shocked and hopeful. I think i can take you to visite many China famous scence. At first,i will take you to my home.My mother and father are very happy that i have a foreign friend will come to China.And they held many Chinese delicious foods for you.For exampor:Mapo tofo,sichuan fish and beijing dark.You can try it,maybe those is fit to you.