2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowday,many parents help their children do everything,which let their kids lose independence.Therefore,we can draw a conclusion that kids should be independent.Only in this way can kids grow up truly. In order to let children become independent, parents shouldn't do everything and arrange everything for their kids .They should encourage their kids to try to do everything firstly.On the one hand,if the kids succeed,parents should give them parise .On the other hand ,if the kids fail,parents should comfort them instead of blaming them.What is more,if the task is really difficult for kids to take ,parents should give them some advices,which are helpful for kids to finish their task.In a word,parents should let their children become inddependent instead of doing everything for their kids.