2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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As a student,I have a duty to keeping a green enviroment for our campus.It is important to reate a green campaus because a good enviroment is good for our heathly,and it more improve our study . Of course,the green campus not only refer to the green envirment,but also it refer to the study and life of students on the campus.we knows that a good school have more moral rules so that it can asorbed many famous teachers,so,many students will come to the school. To creating a green campus,we should obey school's rules.Improve of our self-conscious as the study and life these two aspact.I think that we can buliding a beauty hometown if we protected our campus as ourserves home.