Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
In nowadays,internet play a very important role in modern life.At the same time ,we need to learn how to choice what we need. At first,internet provide us of knowdge,we should treasure it.moreover,it is some bad of internet to service,for exam,it is able to teach terrible knowdge and result to many people are adddicted to computer games.last but the lest,everyone all can on line ,only you apply a ID ,so lots of people are not enough to share theirs suggest. As we know ,everone is a teacher ,but we should try to deal with this problem.and comfidence in yourself you will be succeed.