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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In nowadays,internet play a very important role in modern life.At the same time,we need to learn how to choice what we needs. At first,internet provide us of knowledge,we should treasure it.Moreover,it is some bad of internet to lead many teenagers to play games.For exam,it is able to teach terrible knowledge and result to many people are addicted to computer games.last,everyone all on line ,only with a ID,so it is difficult to whether choose their ideas. As we know,everyone should be a teacher ,but we should try to deal with this problem.And comfidence in yourself you will be succeed.Only in this way can you attain more you want.

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