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这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达不够丰富,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
My name is Lingming,I'm a boy.I am born in 1986,15,June.I graduated from Beifang university English major on july ,2008.At my college life,I get good mark on kinds of school lessions.I have stongful skill that listening,speaking,reading and writing for English.My scend foreign language is German.I have basic German Still.In addition,I am good at process of foreign trade.I like playing basketball,singing songs and watching movies.I want to be a foreign trade clerk ,please give me a chance.