2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My hometown is Inner Mongolia and the place is very beautiful.My friend is john.I will invite you to vist my hometown. I will take him to see glasslands,because it's great wonder and the air is fresh.We can read the horse in grasslands and eat some delicious food that it is belong to Inner Mongolia. Local people are warmful to the guest.their are enthusiastic to treat you and take you see the match.There are two people wrestle each other . they are strongful.I will take you visit other place ,it different from it. I hpoe you visit my hometown .if you will come,I treats you.