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How to make your life more meaningful Nowadays,with the rapidly development of society and accompanying much pressure,the fewer persons could be quiet in a while to think about how to make the life more meaningful. But there are still such opinions explaining the meaning of life . They support that earning enough money and owning the powerful authority ,which not only content with all the material requirements ,but also are the most important standards to certify that you are a successful man, are the real meaningful life. Besides, some of people, looking forward to freedom and emphasizing on mental requirements , applaud that walking by myself ,whatever others said and the most important thing in a life is happy everyday. For the invoices mentioned above , i have no objections to them. Actually , surviving in the environment fulfilling fierce competitions and challenges, is the foundamental factor to have such thinking . Beside these , i am eager and willing to leave some positive energies and sustainable resources to the next generation. Even if we have dead and the bones have decayed and rotted away some day, our souls and spirits still survive in the world and have been handed down from one generation to another.
