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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication there is no deny that the internet is our life can't leave.nowadays,more and more people like communication with internet.there is no doubt that the internet bring convenient to us.but i think we should't addition to the internet.i think we need communication face to face. there are three reasons.firstly,face to face can make people relationship more clostly.secondly,if we always communication with internet.in the future,someday may be we will lost our base ability of face to face communication.the last but no least,if we awalys surf the internet.it will harmful to our health.especially hurt to our eyes.so,for our health,we should refluse all the time communication on the internet. it goes without saying that we need face to face communication and refluse aways communication on the internet.let us to do it from ourselves.

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