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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
On the important of a name. It's known to us that name plays a very important role in our society.At most time,people learn something usually by the name.But there are some arguments about the important of name. On one hand,some people think name is not important in our daily life.Because they think that name just a symbol and it's not have too much meaning after it.Sometime they even think name just used to distinguish thing or people to each other.But on the other hand,others people value name very much.They think that a name contains so much meanings,and people usually have some beautiful exception after a name.Parents usually name their children with a sweet wish. As far as for me,I hold the same opinion with the people who think highly of name.Because a name has it's specially meaning to the man who make it.And life always full of hope,people can express their expectation by a beautiful name.
