作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
On the important of a name. It's known to us that name plays a very important role in our society.At most time,people learn something usually by the name.But there are some arguments about the important of name. On one hand,some people think name is not important in our daily life.Because they think that name just a symbol and not have too much meaning after it.Sometime they even think name just used to distinguish thing or people to each other to make life easier.After all,name is just a tool to them,and they use this tool to make them live a easier life.But on the other hand,others people value name very much.They think that a name contains so much meanings,and people usually have some beautiful exception after a name.Parents usually name their children with a sweet wish. As far as for me,I hold the same opinion with the people who think highly of name.Because a name has it's specially meaning to the man whom make it.And life always full of hope,people can express their expectation by a beautiful name.A good name can also make a unforgettable to strangers.