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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1945
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

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作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and techenology,more and more people believe that reduce waste on campus is becomeing a serious problem. Attitudes towards reduce waste on campus vary frpm person to person.Some hold that waste on campus is a trrible thing,it bad for our life habits.Others insist that although waste is not good,they can not prohibit themslfe to pour some foods.What is more ,there are many student to protect student on campus to waste things,though only a little food. Take into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that waste in everywhere.Especially on campus.It is hight time that put an end to the trend.It must be realized that waste is a wrong habit,we should try to reduce waste,only in this way can we have a beautiful future.

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