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What are your favorite sport? To me, my favorite sport is playing football! Football always brings me joy, it is not only a exciting game, but also can help me to learn now friends. One day, when i was on the way of home, i find a football and played it with my friends by chance, I love playing football deeply since that day, after that day, i often to play football with my friends both the new and the old, and even participate the football competition. Today, i find my dream through football, my dream is to be a professional football player. i also have a idol,he is David Beckham, i believe i will be successful as well as him. football let me to broaden my social circle and let me find my dream, i love it forever!