2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Dear Pacival, orest.There are various rare birds there,and theycan sing,perform,and interact with us.After about an hour,wewill arrive at the peak,Baiyun Summit.The scenery there isspectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the wholecity。 I bet you must be very excitedabout all these activities,and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting forus to explore.All you need to do is pack up and go,and I assureyou that this trip will be a great fun。 Should you have any questionand suggestion,please let me know。 I am looking forward to yourarrival。 Yours sincerely, Romeo