2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Most people believe that health plays a vital role in one’s life. For those who wish to make a big fortune, what would they do if they suffer from illness at work? Studies have revealed that few of them would choose to stop working to take a sick leave, or even a rest at workplace. But, for some of them, their hidden health issues may act as an active volcano ready to explode at any time, if unaware or not taken seriously. Luo Yaoming, a technical backbone of the Ku6.com, had passed away in his early twentieth only six month after on-boarding, sudden and unexpected. He caught a cold at first. But he didn’t take it seriously and continued working, when it soon developed into a more severe disease--myocarditis, the inflammation of the heart muscle that can cause cardiac arrhythmia and heart failure, and eventually took his life. There being no work in the heaven, all wealth he had made turned into nothing but a blank account. Of course, a common cold is nothing serious, but it was his ceaseless effort in pursuit of wealth at the expense of health that caused such a fatal disaster. Had he stopped to take a rest, he’d have recovered completely. Although wealth is highly valued in modern society, health problem is becoming more and more serious largely due to the fact that pressure associated with becoming wealthy, be it social or familial, is rocketing. We’re urged to view health as the highest priority. ‘Where there is life, there is hope”. It’s our responsibility to raise the awareness, after all, health is the best treasure that a man possess.