2005年上海高考写作范文：旅游咨询

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

More and more people would like to live in Shanghai, an international metropolis where they live a modern life.They have dreams to achieve and the city is big enough to prove it.People can’t leave here because of their unwillingness. There are abundant reasons why people are willing to stay in Shanghai.First of all,Shanghai is big enough containing a great diversity of things.Talented people could catch opportunities here and handle them well.Second,Shanghai is a colorful metropolis just like a luxury jewel in Asia.It has the same status in Asia like New York in America.People could find anything in the modern society here to fulfill their imagination.Last but not the least,Shanghai has a mild environment.It’s near the ocean,so the sea wind blow away much pollution.In the meanwhile,Shanghai has an amount of convenience for the local. In my perspective,Shanghai may not be the best choice for everyone.Someone achieve the dream here,meanwhile,someone also gets hurt.Getting the most may not be the happiest thing.Take more care of your truly thinkings and make proper decisions.If you still want to live in Shanghai?