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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Happiness Happiness is an essential feeling that we need.We will have a positive emotion when we feel happy so that we can do everything effective. However, some people have a wrong mind that happiness is the absence of problems.It means that we will feel happy if we don't have any problems.Though we perhaps feel happy that we do everything is good,we also have to know it isn't a real happy.Real happy is prefer to have an ability to deal with the problem rather than absence of the problem.If you develop the ability to deal with them,you will never afraid of the problem. From my perspective,people can read some books to develop the ability.In the book,people will find plenty of successful examples that we should learn.Such as Jobs,the chief of Apple Company suffered variety of problems in his life.For example,he was fired from his own company just because he made a mistake.But he didn't allow him to upset for a long time,thus he cheered up as soon as possible.In this case, we should realize that the problem isn't an unfavorable thing to prevent you feeling happy.Happiness is only because of your ability to deal with this problem,if you can do it well,you will get the happiness.
