英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40930
要求:
题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

There is a saying that 'Seeing is believing.'How do you think that ?Is it relly a truth.No It depends.For example,The area between Chen and Cai was in great poverty,Confucius has not had the meal for a long time ,his disciple, Yan Hui Tried his best to get some rice and cooked it for Confucius right away but during the cooking time ,Confucius noticed that Yan Hui was sneaking a handful rice in the pan For a while, Rice was cooked, YanHui treat Confucius, Confucius pretended not to see (YanHui Stealing the food). Confucius said: "i just dreamed of my ancestors and want to sacrifice them by some clean dinner " YanHui replied: "it's not clean,there was just ash float into the pot (dirty rice), so i just grab it to eat." Confucius sighs: "(supposedly) Seeing is Believing, but is not necessarily reliable; should believe my heart, my heart also can not believe it. You remember, it is not easy to understand a person!" So it is difficult to know the truth, By this story,you can never draw a conclusion right away just hear or see something ,for it is not sensible.

会员评论0个评论)
越已之之
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:92.0xuganjun1997

人气:81发布:2017-05-01

得分:91.0terrykk

人气:35发布:2014-11-18

得分:90.01123242546

人气:74发布:2014-09-19

得分:89.5Nick`c

人气:49发布:2014-07-09

得分:89.5awesomekaro

人气:53发布:2014-08-14