拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Digital age Now it's obvious that digital products are more than before.living in this digital age we can get a convenient life.There are so many digital products around us.Such as computer,cellphone , TV,laptop and so on. Living with so many products we can surf the Internet and talk to our friends through our computer at anytime.By cellphone we can send a message or have a phone call to the one we want to talk to and this way we can fell closer to each other than before.And we can know the temperature with a exactly number,by this way we can decide to dress more cloth or take the umbrella.What's more we can watching TV to have a relax or we can know news at the first time.That's sounds good,but every coins has two sides. Now,everything can be expressed by a number.Grades is the most important number to students in school,and the number on the bank card is the key to indicate a man's successful.People are surrounded by number,and even the digital is a most important part to see a man.