句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;词汇表达较丰富,学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,文中有些单词拼错了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Living in an age when information explodes,it turns out that "A wealthy information creates a poverty of attention." as the saying goes.I can not agree more with it. A case in point is like this:majority of students receive e-mails and chat with their friends on mobile phones without time limiting when they are reading,which leads to their low effeciency. As for me,I begin to take measures to avoid inrelevant information.First of all,I spare no efforts to fulfill tasks with time limited.Only if so can I improve the speed of finishing the tasks.Moreover,when I go to the library,I will leave my mobile phone in the dormitary.It can help me pay more attention to reading. From what has been discussed above,it is high time to manage ourselves effeciently to finish the task as soon as possible.