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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Living in an age when information explodes, it turns out that "A wealthy information creates a poverty of attention. " as the saying goes. I can not agree more with it. A case in point is like this:majorities of students receive e-mails and chat with their friends on mobile phones without time limiting when they are reading, which leads to their low efficiency. As for me, I begin to take measures to avoid irrelevant information. First of all, I spare no efforts to fulfill tasks with time limiting. Only if so can I improve the speed of finishing the tasks. Moreover, when I go to the library, I will leave my mobile phone in the dormitory. It can help me pay more attention to reading. From what has been discussed above, it is high time to manage ourselves efficiently to finish the task as soon as possible.
