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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5739
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Living in an age when information explodes, it turns out that "A wealthy information creates a poverty of attention. " as the saying goes. I can not agree more with it. In fact,numerous example can be enumerated in our daily life.A case in point is like this:majorities of students receive e-mails and chat with their friends on mobile phones without time limiting when they are reading, which leads to their low efficiency. As for me, I begin to take measures to avoid irrelevant information. First of all, I spare no efforts to fulfill tasks with time limiting. Only if so can I improve the speed of finishing the tasks. Moreover, when I go to the library, I will leave my mobile phone in the dormitory. It can help me pay more attention to reading. From what has been discussed above, it is high time to manage ourselves efficiently to finish the task as soon as possible.

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