2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. why? what causes? With the reform and opening-up policies of our country, great changes have developed in china. The living standard of China residents have great changed in many sides, which includ e eating,wearing,housing and travel. These changes great improve Chinese residents' life and quality, making our life more rice and colorful. It is natural, we think that people should live a happer life than before; but from some survey made by government and public institutions, the result is against with we expectanted. From the result to see that the quality of life in large cities is not decreasing,but increasing. what are the causes of decreasing of metropolis habitants' quality of life. In the first place, a large number people leave country and make money in urban area; they provide not only new and fresh blood for city's development, but also created more fierce compete atmosphere for every residents. huge compete make everyone have to more hard and strive to treat study and work. so most people feel very tired on their work day.huge pressure make their spirit and body is long-term in sub-healthy condition,that is bad people's healthy. second, fast-paced life make people few have time to enjoy life and focus on make money.Modernazation and efficiency make us have to face greatly increased house price and all kinds of price increasing. These factors urge most common residents to make money for good education and better housing condition.With the great change of social structure, people have to adjust their position and face these changes; these all take great pressure for individuals, because they must sure that their social statues is better or maintain in a good place. on the other hand, absent love and take care is a common phenomena in country, most young parents and midle-age leaves their birthplaces and leave younger babies and children in wide rural area. they must choose making money to support their family, rather than feed their baby and support for the elderly. they stay in big cities and miss their relatives everytime, all these causes the quality of life in big cities decreasing, we should pay attention on improve life quality. relatives, friendship and love are all basic need for human. we should cost more time on family and enjoy life, adjust our heart to creature a more health life.